I'm hangin' laundry on the line
in the sunshine, 'cause I can't afford the dryer
and we can't afford the fire that's comin'
to our planet if we don't watch what
we're usin', it's confusin' ain't it?
How the well-off bigwigs 'suited pigs'
can tell us to cut down while they're
drivin' all around in their thirsty monster cars
and flying up against the stars to places
where there's people dyin' for a drink
of water while they enjoy wine, and laughter.
Someone told me I think too much. I think we're out
of touch with reality. I clip the last peg in place
and see another private jet fly overhead.
I think too much, they said.
©2008-2009 =ghostlove
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I have a notebook full of writing here that I haven't yet submitted, so I'm going to put some of it up, see what you lot think of it.
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CommentsI love this. The message rings true, and the writing is excellent.
-- Be inspired: *simplyprose and *simplypoetry. Save trees and elephants! Check out poopoopaper.com! This is so true, well done.
 -- My icon was made by ~MoonTheBlueNeko. Star Ocean PA’s… Play my Albel and Fayt Game-Fiction. It’s up to you to decide their fate. [link]  Fabulous! Unfortunately true, but an amazing poem.--  Rules are like paperclips: meant to keep things together, fun to bend, and easily twisted out of shape.There is no problem the human mind cannot solve or create.Step One is learning the ropes. Step Two is chewing through them.Waow!
I`m gonna have a test tomorrow which has somewhat something to do with this, with the pollution and such, it`s sad :S Heh I reckon I think too much aswell, I know the feeling :S I`m glad you submitted the poems  -- This was not my idea this is dripping with emtion-the key to any memorable poem.
I also like your use of structure, and grammar. really helps to hit it home.  --  I wish only to fascinate, and be fascinated. ~Gemi-QuarianStock ~ Stock, anyone?  that's powerful. <3
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