You burst into my life and made me whole
and showed me love I never thought I'd feel.
Through you I found a new side to my soul;
uncovered parts of myself I'd concealed.
Through all life's tumbles, happiness or fear
you know that I will always care for you.
As you grow, whether I am close or near,
I'll show support in everything you do.
And when my life is drawing to a close
and you are full-fledged, thriving on your own
I'll know the truth that every mother knows;
I did my best, that love is all you've known.
Before I knew your face I could just drift;
to have you in my life's the greatest gift.
©2006-2009 =ghostlove
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File Size: 792 bytes
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CommentsDang why are you such a great poet!!! This is beautiful! I love the way you rhyme- it rolls off the tongue and feels great, and it's not dad rhyming either XD! A lot of thought obviously goes into the words you use and the way you use them and where they go, so great stuff! It was so sweet!
 -- Goku: "I have been waiting forever to get out of these dinky pyjamas!" Vegeta: "So, you feel like taking on a real Saiyan?" [link] Live Journal Rules. You know it. ~albelxfayt~albel-nox-club -- Goku: "I have been waiting forever to get out of these dinky pyjamas!" Vegeta: "So, you feel like taking on a real Saiyan?" [link] Live Journal Rules. You know it. ~albelxfayt~albel-nox-club I wish I could write that good..
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