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I'm sitting on a filthy crumb-filled carpet
full of ground-in raisins and toast crumbs
wearing a yellow hard-hat several sizes too small
and I wouldn't be anywhere else.

I've been awake all night; cuddling and singing
stumbling from one room to another, desperate
to fix it all and failing in my every effort
but I wouldn't have been anywhere else.

We play monotonously. Car goes up, car goes down
and a small commanding voice directs the action
and I am tired, so tired I don't understand the game
but I wouldn't be anywhere else.

I receive a kiss, more snot than lips, without thinking
I wipe his nose and mouth with my hands, deposit
the mess on my jeans without a second thought
and I wouldn't be anywhere else.

He cries, and whines, his spots are itchy and he
doesn't understand, can't comprehend why I in my wisdom
don't click my fingers and bring it all to an end. I fail him
still I wouldn't be anywhere else.

We're exhausted, both of us, though he hides it well
dragging me to and fro, to do this and that,
and I wistfully think of my soft, comfy bed
but really I wouldn't be anywhere else.
I wouldn't be anywhere else.
©2008-2009 =ghostlove
:iconghostlove:

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I have a notebook full of writing here that I haven't yet submitted, so I'm going to put some of it up, see what you lot think of it.

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:iconrushy:
Beautiful piece!
:+fav:

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Member of :- #britain #DAPensioners .
In vino veritas, nunc est bibendum. - In wine is truth, now we must drink.
:iconmissunderstand:
Aw.
Chicken pox?
Lucky to have such a wonderful parent.
Cute poem!

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I'm not going to ask you to,
but it would be nice,
if my gallery had visit from you.
:iconmrsnox:
Hee, apart from the 'snot' part this was rely cute! ;)
Great poem again!

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:iconjulesthenorweegie:
I think this is a great poem :D
Very down to earth :) I can feel it

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This was not my idea
:icontintalasia:
I'm a mom. I've sat on that 'carpet' too. You put your heart and soul into your writing.... it pays off. Beautiful!

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~ Every season spills its own wonder upon the earth ~
:iconcrazyfoxmoon:
So very sweet! How's Orion doing?

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Easily distracted by shiny things.
:iconswitchbladeserenade:
This brought a tear to my eye. I miss my boy so much... :(

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