Why do you bug me, little mosquito
with your siren-whine which mines my mind?
You scream past my ears, invisible
in the dark, greedy for my blood,
my vital fluid your refreshment;
my existence, your sustenance.
I wish to squish you, little skeeter.
I search for you, ungraspable
in this opaque night, you are concealed;
My thoughts unhinged by your rasping scream.
Vociferous in your hunger, you search
for nourishment from my spirit.
©2006-2009 =ghostlove
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Just for fun. Work in progress, as all of my writing is really.
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CommentsYou know, I know exactly what you mean. And it's fun to read! Especially:
'I wish to squish you, little skeeter.' Brilliant. -- We'll cross that bridge when we come to it. That was meant to be funny, right?
 It was hilarious- mosquitos are coming up a lot lately for m- someone on myjournal was in a swarm of them apparently.  But I really liked this- even when writing about mosquitos you write beautifully - it sounds fab  and I just love the word little 'skeeter'- but have to ask on a serious note what 'vociferous' means.Then I can add it to my 'learn a word a day' on 43 things!! XD! Great job!!! -- Goku: "I have been waiting forever to get out of these dinky pyjamas!" Vegeta: "So, you feel like taking on a real Saiyan?" [link] Live Journal Rules. You know it. ~albelxfayt~albel-nox-club vociferous
adj : conspicuously and offensively loud; given to vehement outcry; "a vociferous mob". -- The Orion Chronicles | Flickr Thanks!
 I'm a writer but there are lots of words I don't know- hehe.-- Goku: "I have been waiting forever to get out of these dinky pyjamas!" Vegeta: "So, you feel like taking on a real Saiyan?" [link] Live Journal Rules. You know it. ~albelxfayt~albel-nox-club  Yeah- I read manga for all ages sometimes and come across a word that I think...:blink: what the heck is that??? So I grab a dictionary- no use splitting hairs about it, this is the way we learn!  -- Goku: "I have been waiting forever to get out of these dinky pyjamas!" Vegeta: "So, you feel like taking on a real Saiyan?" [link] Live Journal Rules. You know it. ~albelxfayt~albel-nox-club Choice words there miss, and choice concept, verging on abstract, applies to all mosquito-like characters.
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