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Don't go! I want to cry out to you. I know it would be futile.

When we anticipate, we wish the time away,
counting down days and hours that seem too long
like the weeks and months ahead of us might never pass,
like the goal we both crave might never be achieved.
Time drags his feet as though tired, uninterested
in us two who depend on his rapid movement.
We look forward to every morning;
every rising sun brings us one day closer to our meeting.

Once we conjugate, the universe quickens,
the time we wished away we now wish to stop still
as it speeds all-too-quickly towards the end, free-fall
of seconds and minutes rushing over our heads, uncaught.
Time leaps forward, as though refreshed, renewed
though we plead for him to slow, to rest, to stop a while.
We dread each new, shining morning;
every rising sun brings us one day closer to our parting.

When we dissipate, we start again, that countdown
anticipation renewed, and Time resumes his too-slow wander
toward the next time we meet, too distant to conceive.
So our lives continue, in this lopsided lame-horse canter
with his trot and gallop so unfairly placed, for us,
our time apart too lengthy, our time together too brief.
One day the spaces between sunrises will be neither too long
nor too short, for every sunrise will find us together.

Don't go! I want to cry, the unfairness of Time's cruel games.
There is only a promise, that one day he will not have us in his hold.
©2007-2009 =ghostlove
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Guess who left my house this morning to travel back to his native country?




All I write these days is angsty poetry.
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I didn't realise he was leaving today. :( Many *hugs* :hug: :blowkiss:

This, however, is beautiful. So heartfelt; it certainly hits close to home for me (I'm gonna send this to Emma :heart:), and obviously even more so for yourself. I wish there was a way to stop the pain. :hug: I love the last line - indeed, the only thing that helps is the promise of a time when time and distance won't matter.
:sniff: I know how you feel. This piece made me choke up. I have just gotten off the phone with mine, and hearing his voice, knowing that I won't get to see him until September makes me sad. :(

:hug: I tell myself though that one day I won't have to do this anymore...

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Beautiful... I love it :heart:

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Awww
Norway sucks aye? ;) :P

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:hug: Same here... November is the tentatively pinned date for us, though whether it will actually happen or not I'll wait and see. :hmm:

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Awh bless :P
:hug:
He`ll be back soon though, I`m sure of it :)
So hang in there!

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